I like the sample but I think you should work a bit more on it.
In the meddle of the track when you stop the sample you should fade the sample not just cut the sound.
This is noticed because the sample repeat for long time.
The meddle of the track lost a direction once you take the sample off and that is because you do not keep the drive in the track and do many beat cuts.
(wish is your favorite style as I been listen).
Track need drive and need more bouncing sounds in the meddle.
The track sounds dry, you should be more aware of the EQ in the sounds.
The remix Idea is good
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